Friday

Final Crit


Much of what the work produced for my final book quite hadn't worked the frame idea although looked good didn't really convey the fact that it was upper class and didn't work with the overall oily rag style look. I was also given the advice to look at alternatives for the cover the book as the idea i had preciously used for the crit wasn't as good as it could have been.

I should also try to look at different cloths for the expensiveness of the car and hopefully get the expensiveness of the cloth to work with that of the cars. For the cloth basically just use the oily background and reduce it to correspond to the expensiveness. I will also include the price of the cars on the cloth so that the organization of the logos is more clear. The covers i could possibly use with that of the cloths is possibly a bucket or overalls.

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